全民英檢中級複試中的寫作測驗,有一題型是故事接龍(unfinished stories),題目會先給個開頭,提供若干句子,要你把故事完成。長度約一百二十字(8~12個句子),評分重點包括內容、組織、文法、用字遣詞、標點符號、大小寫。我們提供以下兩種範文,請參考。故事一開始:It was a bad decision to go out to KTV the night before the exam, but somehow I felt that I could still find time to study. Unfortunately, it was 1 A.M. by the time I got home!
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這兩篇範文的故事一開始都是作者在大考之前去狂歡,回到家已深夜。第一篇作者接著敘述他因書沒讀完而打算夾帶小抄入考場。第二天考試時,他的良心抬頭了,成績低空飛過。第二篇作者則是接著敘述想製造個手臂受傷的假意外,沒想到「弄巧成拙」把自己摔得很慘,連帶的考試也不及格。
【範文1】
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1. review(v.) 複習
3. detailed(adj.) 詳細的
5. tempt(v.) 引誘
7. mark(n.) 分數 |
2. sneak(v.) 偷偷地做(某事)
4. sleeve(n.) 袖子
6. conscience(n.) 良心
8. proud(adj.) 引以為傲 |
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It was a bad decision to go out to KTV the night before the exam, but somehow I felt that I could still find time to study. Unfortunately, it was 1 A.M. by the time I got home! In a panic, I picked up my books and started to look things over. But there were hundreds of pages to review and there was no way I could do it all in a few short hours. My only chance was to sneak something into the exam! I made tiny, detailed notes of the whole year's lessons, and then went to sleep. The next morning, I hid the paper in my sleeve and, after entering the examination area, began to write the exam. It was a tough test, and I was tempted to use the "cheat sheet" but something stopped me from doing so. Was it my conscience? I hope it was, although it might just have been my fear of getting caught. In any case, I did the exam the best I could, and though my mark was poor I still passed - and felt proud of myself for making the right decision.
雖然考試前一天去KTV是錯誤的決定,但我覺得仍會有時間讀書,不幸的是到家已是凌晨一點。驚慌之中我開始把書翻完一遍。但有上百頁要複習,我不可能在幾小時內讀完。唯一的可能就是夾帶東西考試,我於是寫了一個滿滿的小抄就上床了。第二天,我把這紙條放在袖子,在進入考場之後,開始作答。這場考試很難,心蠢蠢欲動想看小抄,但有好似什麼東西阻止我這麼做。是我的良心嗎?我希望是,雖然可能是因為我怕被逮到。無論如何,我這場考試我花了最大努力,但還好低空飛過,我以自己做出了正確決定為傲。
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1. pavement (n.) 人行道
3. surge (n.) 突然發生
5. twist (v.) 扭傷
7. buttocks (n.) 屁股
9. sprained (adj.) 扭傷的
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2. fake (v.) 造假
4. balance (n.) 平衡
6. smash (v.) 撞毀
8. limp (v.) 跛行
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It was a bad decision to go out to KTV the night before the exam, but somehow I felt that I could still find time to study. Unfortunately, it was 1 A.M. by the time I got home! What could I do? After some thought, I decided that I needed to fake some kind of accident which hurt my arm and hand, so it would be impossible for me to write the test. Of course, I didn't want to hurt myself too badly, so I carefully planned how I would fall over onto the pavement with my arm held straight out in front of me. My plan ready, I started to fall forward - only to feel a sudden surge of fear. I couldn't do it! I quickly pulled my arm back and shot out my leg to regain my balance. But it was too late! I felt a sharp pain in my ankle, twisted around and smashed to the ground on my buttocks. The next morning, I limped to school with a sprained ankle, wrote the test, and failed miserably. It was the worst day of my life!
雖然考試前一天去KTV是錯誤的決定,但我覺得仍會有時間讀書,不幸的是到家已是凌晨一點。我怎麼辦?稍加思索之後,我決定我需去造個手傷的假事件,這樣我就無法握筆應考了。當然,我並不想把自己給傷的太厲害,所以小心翼翼的計劃如何手臂伸直的撲倒在行人道上。準備就緒之後,我就開始往前倒--但竟然心中生起了一股的恐懼。我做不下去!我很快把手臂抽回、把腿跨出以保持平衡。但一切太遲了。我的腳踝感到一陣刺痛,拐了一下,一屁股就坐到地上了。第二天,我抱著腳踝傷一跛一跛到學校,答完卷,且成績爛的一塌糊塗。這是我一生中最背的一天!
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